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Wednesday, June 8, 2011

NARNIA (revisi)

DATi : THe White witch
Rama: Aslan
Mona : Susan (kakak)
Hafiz: Edmund
Trisna : Lucy
IKa : MIRAZ(tampang seram.)
NARNIA
Once upon a time in North Irland, United Kingdom. There lived a family happily, but their happiness was gone , since there had been a big war there. Lucy Edmund and Susan were separated with their parent and they lived with their aunt. Their aunt is an angrier.
One day.. Lucy edmund n susan palyed hide and seek in the house.
Edmund : Ok, I will count, 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10
Lucy and Susan hide.
Edmund : Ok… Ok… I will find you all. You will not hide far from me.
Susan ran to the room…
Lucy entered a cupboard in a room..
Lusi felt down in the cupboard and she saw behind.
lusi: What is this? ... Cold....
Lusi walked in that land
Lusi: wah.. this is a new world.. The world is in the cupboard
Lusi backed to home and told about what she did in the cupboard.
Lusi: Hey...
Susan: Owh we have been tired to find you, where do you hide?
Lusi: I just hide in acupboard.
Edmund: owh.. I don’t think that you are there
Susan: Yes Lusi,,, If you want to hide , Don’t hide in a place that har to be found.
Lusi: Ok. I will
Edmund : it’s better.
Lusi: Susan,,, edmund.. I want to tell you about something.
Edmund: What is that?
Lusi: Later.. I will tell you in the bedroom
Susan : Let’s go ..
Edmund: What do you want to tell us? I think, that is not real.
Susan : Ihh Edmund .. don’t be like that
Edmund: ya…. Because she used to tell us like that..
Lusi: No.. This is real.
Susan : Come on Lusi, Tell us…!
Lusi: Last time, when i was in the cupboard.. I found a new world..
Edmund : That’s enough Lusi.. No real….
Susan : Ishh.. edmund.. Tell us.
Lusi : In that world , there are much snow there…and it’s cold..
Edmund: Lusi… lusi… Don’t tell us unreal story..
Susan: Lusi… Maybe it’s just your dream…
Edmund: Remember that.. it’s your dream.
Lusi: This’s real.. the world is real..
Susan : Lusi , maybe it’s just your halusination…Let’s sleep.
Edmund: Child!... there will be no a world in a cupboard
LUsi: Yes… I’m right
Susan : Let’s sleep Edmund..
A moment after beginning of sleep…
Edmund : i’m curious,with what lusi told..
And then Edmund walked without his sisters knew..�AEdmund went to the cupboard
Edmund opened the cupboard… then he took a coat in the cupboard…
Edmund: May be I can use this..
Wow.. this is real… there’s a land here.. This is incredible. Lusi is right… here is cold.
Edmund listened to the sound of horse-drawn carriage
Edmund : What is that?
Is there a life here?
Miraz came… A bodyguard of the witch there.
Miraz: Halo MAn
Edmund: Who are you?
Miraz: Calm Down.. I’m a good man..
Edmund: How can you say that you are a good man
Miraz: O..o..o.. As you know, I’m a bodyguard of the witch that dominate this land
Edmund: Ruler?
Miraz: Ya ruler... she has a whole this world and she save this land from the ruin
Edmund: Ruin??
Miraz: Ya ruin.. the country's first ever event of a battle between the evil and our people.. fortunately,, we won
Edmund: where is your majesty?
Miraz: Come here, i will show you..
Edmund: where??
Miraz: Over here,, follow me
Edmund and Miraz went to the forest
Miraz: here..
WW: What is that Miraz..
Miraz: here is… My Lord
WW.: Who is that??
Edmund: Me..
WW: waaa.. a man.. What is your name .. honey..??
Edmund: me.. I’am Edmund
WW: Owh dear.. What a handsome you are..
Edmund: Thanks..
WW: How can you be here?
Edmund: You don’t need to know
Ww: O.. Tell me
Edmund: sorry.. I can’t, … are you a dominator in this land..
WW. : owhh.. ya.. of course
Miraz: Last time I have said that she is our ruler..
WW.: Right .. Honey..
EDmund: o.. if right.. show me your power
WW.: owh.. my power.. a small thing..
Edmund : Show me
WW: Look at this..
WW bewitched a leaf to be 3 candies
WW : Do you want candies?
Edmund: Waw these are Gustav mints,, Impossible..
WW: Honey… those are many here… I can grant what do you want..
Miraz: YA.. benar.. bhakan disini ada Coklat yang luar biasa…
Edmund: Aku mau –mau…mauamauamau..
WW: Oh.. ya bahkan disini lah pabriknya..
Edmund: Tunjukkan kepadaku .. Apakah aku boleh mencicipinya..
WW: tentu saja boleh..
Edmund: Sebanyak – banyaknya??
WW. Tentu…. Ayo naik..
Edmund kemudian naik ke kereta itu..
WW. Mana saudara mu yang lain..
Edmund: Di rumah…kenapa?
WW: jika kamu membawa saudaramu kesini mka kamu akan kami jadikan raja dinegeriku..
Edmund: Oh ya.. bisakah aku memiliki istana coklat..
WW: tentu. Kamu bisa mendapatkan apa yang kamu mau.. jika kamu membawa saudaramu..
Edmund: Ok.. kapan aku bisa..
WW: Sekarang lebih baik..
Edmund: baiklah..
WW: kalo begitu aku kan menunggumu disini..
Edmund kemudian pergi ke rumah..
Malam besoknya...
Lusi: Edmund... dari mana saja kamu..kemaren?
Susan: ya edmund darimana saja kamu kemaren?
Edmund : aku tak kemana- mana kok…
Lusi: apakah kamu ke lemari itu.. ?
Edmund : Tidak.. ngapain aku kesana?
Susan: baiklah kalau begitu..
Tiba – tiba bibi mereka memanggil dengan marah – marah.. sehingga mereka takut dn langsung berlari – lari ke dalam sebuah lemari..tempat lusi menemukan sebuah negri..
Susan: Waw it’s Impossible
Lusi: Ayo kesini..
Susan: Lusi..Is this a land that you told me?
Lusi : yes absolutely..Edmund, have you been here.?
Edmund: nnnn… NO..
Lusi: I think you’ve been here.. Let’s go ..
Susan: OK…
Then they walked to the forest… But Edmund went away from his sisters. .. Edmund went to otherside of the forest. He wanted to meet the white witch.
Miraz: Owhh.. Edmund… Let’s we go..
WW : Sit next to me, but where are your sisters?
Edmund : Oh.. My sisters… they have been here, but I can’t tell them about you..
WW: Ow.. It’s okey..Let’s go to my palace.
In the palace, Edmund didn’t get anything, but he was prisoned by the witch.
Beside that…
Lusi: Where is Edmund?
Susan: Edmund.. I think he is behind of me..
LUsi: There’s no Edmund here… Edmund…. Edmund….
Susan: Edmund.. Edmund…
Lusi: Edmund.. Where are you…?
Susan: Lusi.. may be Edmund goes away from us..
LUsi: Yes.. I think so.. because may be he has been here before..
Susan: Let’s we find him..
Lusi: Ok.. sist..
Susan : Edmund.. Edmund…
And then .. Aslan came to them.. Aslan was a good man there…Aslan was a legendariest that saved the world… THE WORLD is called NARNIA.
Aslan : Hey you… Men..
Lucy : Who are you..?? are you man??
Aslan : No , I’am an elf.. I’m the king in this world.
Susan : King.. Owh.. we are happy to you..
Lucy: But, this world is very cold..
Aslan: yes, this place is cold.. let’s go to my base..
Susan: Your base.. ok.. we want to be there..
Lucy : Show us
Aslan : Ok Let’s GO..
Susan, Lucy, and Aslan went to Aslan’s base camp..
Susan: Wow… there’s no snow here…
Lucy : This is beautiful.
Susan : Aslan, why is there no snow here.?
Aslan : Snow.. There’s no snow here.. because this land is protected by us from the white witch cursing
Lucy: White Witch?
Susan: who is she?
Aslan : White witch is the worst witch in this land, she has cursed this land to be cold forever, except this place. By the way, why are you here?
Susan : We are here because we hide from our aunt and we find this land.
Lucy : But my brother is gone.
Aslan : Gone..
Susan : Yah.. gone..
Aslan : I have thought about this all…
Lucy : What think?
Aslan : There will be 3 men in this world that will save this world from the white witch..
Lucy : But Aslan, we can’t, we have to find our brother..Edmund
Aslan : Ok.. I will help you.. Use this .. may be it will help you..
Susan : Thank you…
Aslan : May be your brother in the palace of The white witch .
Lucy : May be…
Susan : Aslan , help us please..
In the palace of The white witch.. Edmund was in the prison of that palace.
Miraz: hahahahaa.. Edmund.. Edmund.. you will be a stone statue like them… my lord will curse you… hahahaha
Edmund : Please.. Make me free.. I want to meet with my sisters..
Miraz: You can’t…
Edmund : Ok… Once time you will be here to change my position ..
Miraz: Sorry Edmund,, because you can’t…
And then Miraz saw a letter on the table..
Miraz: What is this? A letter? I will give this to my quin
Miraz : My Lord..
WW: yes..
Miraz: there’s a letter for you..
WW: Give me..
Miraz : here you are..
WW : Please ,, free Edmund from your hand.. I will wait you in Death Stone..ASLAN
WW: ASLAN.. !!!! He is still alive… OK I will be there Aslan…. MIRAZ… MIRAZ…
Miraz: Any problem my quin?
WW : Let’s go to the death stone, I want to kill ASLAN..
Miraz: How about him?
WW : Bring him.. We will change him with Aslan..
Miraz: Wow….. that’s very good…
WW: Yeah.. Let’s go..
Beside that..
Susan : we are really sorry, we cann’t ,,, and we don’t want if you’re killed.
Lusi: Yeahh.. ASLAN.. We don’t want
Aslan : It’s Okey.. This is my ordination.. because all of you will save us..
Don’t be sad…
Lusi : but I don’t want.. Aslan..
Aslan : Ok.. the time has come.. I’ve to go..
Susan : We love you Aslan..
Lusi : Yeaahh.. We love you very much…
ASlan : I love you too… you give this to your brother if he has been here.. And you have to fight them, if they come to fight you…
Susan : Okey..
ASlan : Bye..
Lusi and Susan : Bye..
And then Aslan went to the death stone to meet the white witch..
In the death stone..
WW: Where is Aslan…?
Miraz : May be , he doesn’t want if he is changed with this boy.. How about if we curse this boy..
Edmund : No… Please.. no…
WW: Good Idea,, but we wait a moment..
Miraz : Look… He is Aslan… Over there..
WW: ASlan…
ASlan : Sorry I’m late…
WW : It’s okey ..
Aslan : Are you Edmund?
Edmund : yes I’m Edmund.. where are my sisters..?
Aslan : They are ok in my base..
Edmund : owh.. it’s better..
WW : Aslan..
Aslan : What? The worst witch … !!!
WW: HAhahaha.. Long time no see you… I think you have been killed on the war last time
Aslan : I’m Still alive … as you know !!!
WW: But later, you will be killed in this stone..
Aslan : Please .. free Edmund…
WW: Ok.. I will make him free, but before that you have to promise that you will die in this stone..
Aslan : It’s Okey..
WW: ..Miraz…
Miraz : Yes..
WW: Make him free..
Miraz : Ok.. Now you will be free…. man…
Edmund : Aslan Thank you…
Aslan : It’s Okey Edmund.. go from here ..now.. meet you sisters..
Edmund : Okey…Thank you so much.
Aslan : WW… now .. you can do that..
And then WW killed Aslan in that stone…
WW: hahahaha… ASLAN… So stupid..
Miraz…
Miraz : Yes my lord..
WW : It’s time for us to get a whole this world..
Miraz : Of course… My lord..
Let’s we fight them…
In other side..
Edmund : Lusi…. Susan….
Lusi n Susan : Edmund…. You are saved…
Lusi : where is Aslan …
Susan : Yeahh.. where is Aslan..?
Edmund: I’m sorry.. Aslan has died..
Lusi : No…I will meet him..
Susan n’ Edmund : Lusi… you can’t..
Lusi: Sorry .. I will pick Aslan up..
Lusi went to the death stone..
In the death stone, Lusi saw Aslan, WW and Miraz were not there,and she gave Aslan the water that had been given by Aslan before..
Lusi : Aslan , please… Wake up… may be this water can help you…
Aslan … aslan… you are still alive..
Aslan : Lusi… you save me..
Lusi : Aslan .. I love you….
Aslan : me too.. Now let’s we back to my base.. may be ,, there have been a war there..
In other side,… the white witch and the backbone attacked Aslan base. Susan and Edmund also attacked them..
Edmund : Are you Miraz ? Feel this…
They attacked each other.. but in other side.. Susan was ready to archery Miraz..
Finally, miraz was killed.. but The white witch was still alive..
WW: You can kill Miraz, but you can’t kill me… feel this….
Aslan : No…
Aslan came with Lusi.. after that, Aslan attacked each other with The white witch..
Susan : Lusi .. Edmund.. Let’s help Aslan.. we can do that..
Lusi and Edmund : Ok..
Susan, lusi, Edmund and Aslan attacked them…
Because of their power,.. finally the white witch was killed..
And then, that land became a beautifull land again.. there is no snow.. The white witch ‘s bodies was prisoned… Lusi , Susan, and Edmund became the king and the quin there… They live happily…But they had to back at home…

The end.

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